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This guide will help you to fill out a successful application to the
USS Aquarius. It is designed to be used at the same
times as you fill out the application. Following this guide
will give you a *MUCH* better chance at having your application
accepted!
NOTE: Throughout this guide, "he" is used as a generic term.
This guide applies to both male, female, and androgynous characters |
| Purpose |
Looking at the application, it can
seem a little bit daunting. We ask for a lot of our applicants
because we want the USS Aquarius to be the best possible sim
that it can be. So, we have developed this guide to take an
in-depth look at the application form, and provide you with some
guidance on what we are looking to get from a successful
application. This guide is
broken into several parts:
- Breaking Down the Application
-- This breaks down selected sections of the application and
gives you pointers and answers questions about the sections.
- The
Biography Explained --
An in-depth look at the various sections of the biography, and
gives you many tips for making your application successful
- The Sample Post Explained -- Tips and
tricks for showing off your skills via our sample post.
- Things to Remember -- Additional
Tips and Last-Minute Reminders
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| Breaking Down the
Application |
| Breaking Down the Application |
Looking at the application there are
several areas where some explanation can be beneficial. Let's
break down the application and take a look at some of the problem
areas.
- Real Age -- Obsidian
Fleet (and subsequently, the USS Aquarius) requires that
all players be 13 years of age or older to join the Fleet.
This is due to the Children's Online Protection Act (COPA) that
involves all sorts of legalities in collecting information from
people under 13. So, if you're under 13, come back and
apply when you're of age! If you apply now, your
application will be rejected.
- Instant Messengers -- We
have places for you to enter your instant messenger screen
names. These will be placed on a password-protected
webpage accessible only to crewmembers of the Aquarius.
This will help crewmembers contact each other to talk about the
plot, work up joint posts, or just become friends. You
aren't required to have any IMs, and you aren't required to give
any that you do have if you do not wish to.
- Site Username / Password
-- One unique feature of the USS Aquarius is the ability to
login and have access to several special areas accessible only
to crewmembers. You will have the ability to log in and
update your biography, post in our forums, and view our crew
contact list, so it's important that you make this password
something you can remember. Please make your username the
initial of your character's first name and entire last name.
(Example: A character named Joe Smith would have a
username of JSmith.) This will help you remember it, and
will help the command staff in administration purposes.
- Requested Position --
This is the position that you will hold aboard the Aquarius.
There are two main types of positions -- officer and enlisted.
Officers follow the standard "Ensign-Captain" rank system that
we are most familiar with. They attend the Academy for
four years and go through a lot of broad training.
Enlisted personnel, however, comprise the bulk of the actual
crew. They go to a training course for six months to two
years and get specific training in their desired field. A
lot of their training is 'on the job' training, and they do not
go to the Academy. Keep this in mind when writing your
biography! NOTE: Some positions *do* require some
experience. Make sure to read "Experience Requirements"
below before applying!
- Species/Gender -- There
are certain types of races not allowed in Obsidian Fleet, and
they are discussed on the provided link. Don't apply as
one of these races! Even if your application is
phenomenal, it will be rejected on those grounds. Also,
make sure that you have a good background of the species that
your character will be. This will not only make it easier
for you to play, but will prevent the rest of the crew from
cringing when you say a Klingon has green blood.
- Height -- Make sure to
make this realistic. Seven foot tall Humans are very rare!
Please put your height in feet and inches.
- Weight -- Again, make
sure to make this realistic. If you happen to play that
seven foot tall Human, they're not going to weigh 115 pounds!
Please put your weight in pounds.
- Character Age --
Remember: You cannot join Starfleet Academy nor enlist in
Starfleet until you are 18 years of age. The standard Academy
Course lasts four years, so the youngest your officer character
would be is 22 years old. Enlisted characters can be as
young as 18. Please put your age in this format: "XX
Earth Years"
- PBEM Experience -- The
Aquarius is a pretty picky sim, and generally, the more
experience you have, the more likely you are to be accepted.
However, we gladly take good players even if they are not
experienced, so if you're interested but don't have any
experience, apply anyway! NOTE: Some positions *do*
require some experience. Make sure to read "Experience
Requirements" below before applying!
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| Breaking Down the
Biography |
| Service Record |
The character's Service Record is a
record of the past Starfleet postings that your character has had.
Always start out with the four years in Starfleet Academy (for
Officers). The Service Record needs to be in the following
format:
- Year(s) Served - Posting -
Position (Rank)
For example, for Admiral Benjamin
Farrel, the first three entries would be:
- 2360-2364 - Starfleet Academy
- 2364-2365 - USS Comanche
- Flight Control Officer (Ensign)
- 2365-2366 - USS Comanche
- Assistant Chief Flight Control Officer (Lieutenant Junior
Grade)
Things to remember about the Service
Record:
- Make sure to cover all date
ranges and all rank changes. For application purposes,
assume a rank of Lieutenant Junior Grade for a Department
Head/Senior Staff position, Ensign for any other officer
position, and Petty Officer Third Class for any enlisted
position.
- Any ranks included will have no
bearing on the rank that you will get on the Aquarius. Be
prepared to change it if needed.
- Your service record and ranks
will be dependent on the type of position you chose.
Please make sure to write your biography appropriately!
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| Appearance |
This section is all about the
character's appearance. Some questions to consider are:
- What color and style is your
character's hair?
- What kind of skin does he have?
- What color are his eyes?
- Does he have any distinguishable
features (facial hair, scars, freckles, etc.)?
With the Aquarius being a
writing game, it's very important to be able to imagine what each
character looks like. It helps to make the experience more
realistic for everyone. |
| Background |
This section is the most important
section of the biography, as it gives all of the nitty-gritty
information about your character. You tell about his
childhood, schooling, experiences, Academy life, and any previous
postings. Some questions to consider are:
- What kind of family life did
your character have?
- What influences did his
childhood have on his future career decisions?
- What did he go through at the
Academy?
- What kinds of experiences shaped
his life and made him into the person that he is now?
Remember: The Background
section must be at least 500 words in length. Put
thought into it and make the character as well-defined as possible! |
| Personality |
This is where you tell about the
character's personality and mannerisms. Some questions to
consider are:
- Is he calm or quick-tempered?
- Is he a nice guy, or is he
crabby to everyone he meets?
- Is he a social butterfly or a
wallflower?
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| Special Notes |
This section is for any special
notes about the character that have no place in the rest of the
biography. It is an in-character part of the biography, and
shouldn't be used for other notes. "None" is a perfectly
acceptable response in this section. |
| The Sample Post
Explained |
| Why have a sample post? |
The sample post is probably the single-most
important part of your application. It literally presents to
us the way that you will post on the sim. As such, it is very
important that you put your best foot forward on the sample post. |
| The Situation |
The situation for the sample post
is: "The first night of your assignment on the USS Aquarius,
the ship is attacked by unknown assailants while you are sleeping.
What would you do?" It's important to make sure that you
address what happened in the situation and delve into what you would
do. Some items to consider:
- Put the sample post in the same
format you'd make a post to the sim. If you wouldn't do it
in the sim, don't do it in the sample.
- Put thought into it! Most
people wouldn't write a real post in 5-10 minutes, so your
sample post shouldn't be written in 5-10 minutes.
Remember: The Sample Post must be at least
250 words in length. Put
thought into it and make it a good post. For help, see our
Posting Guide. |
| Things to Remember |
| Experience Requirements |
Some positions on the USS Aquarius
require a specific amount of prior experience from potential
applicants. The current experience requirements are as
follows:
- Department Heads / Senior
Staff -- One year verifiable Star Trek PBeM Experience, or
six months Obsidian Fleet experience with a letter of
recommendation from an OF Commanding Officer.
- Assistant Department Heads
-- Six months verifiable Star Trek PBeM Experience, or three
months Obsidian Fleet experience with a letter of recommendation
from an OF Commanding Officer.
- All Other Positions -- No
previous experience required.
You may wonder why we have experience
requirements. The reason for this is that the
Department Heads and Senior Staff play a very important role in the operation of
the sim. They welcome new players in their departments,
lead portions of the storyline, help identify ways to make the sim
better, and more. Assistant Department Heads are essentially
Department Heads in training, and could be called to move up if
the Department Head leaves. With this in mind, we feel
that it is prudent to have players with prior experience in these
positions. |
| Tips and Tricks |
Finally, here are some tips and
tricks to help you with making the most of your application.
- English is Important -- The
USS Aquarius is a writing game in the English language.
As such, we expect our players to have a good handle on the
English language. Proper usage is very, very important.
Make sure to review your application and correct any spelling,
grammar, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes.
- Know Your Stuff -- There's
nothing worse in an application and on the sim than having
people write about something when it's obvious they have no idea
what they are talking about. If you're going to include
background on a race/technology/event, make sure to do your
research and get your facts correct.
- Word Requirements -- Make sure
you meet the word requirements in the background portion of the
sample post. While these aren't absolute (we won't reject
you because you only have 495 words in your background), we are
pretty stringent on having a well-developed background and a
nice sized sample post.
- Detail, Detail, Detail -- Be as
detailed as possible in your application. The more detail
you have, the more realistic that it will be to the reader.
- Read the Rules -- By submitting
the application, you agree to follow all
USS Aquarius and
Obsidian Fleet rules.
- Take Your Time -- The
application will take some time to do. It's not designed
to be done in five or ten minutes, and we'll know if that's all
you spend on it.
Remember, the USS Aquarius *is* a
game. However, we want the game to be as fun as possible for
everyone involved, and that does take some work on everyone's part.
We hope this guide has been a big help to you during your
application process. Good luck! |
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This "Guide to a Successful Application"
is for use aboard the USS Aquarius ONLY. It may *NOT* be
reproduced on any other site in any form without expressed written permission
from Commander William Doubtfire. |
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